Second draft of DPS

This is the second draft of the DPS. I tried to use the same sort of image that was used for the first draft because I liked the layout of the body text around the talent as it looks professional, however I don't like where i have placed some of the text, such as underneath the talent.

I stuck to the colour scheme of black, white and blue like I used for the second draft of the front cover because I wanted each page to be tied in together so it consequently looks more professional. However, i planned on having the text in black but because the some of the image is dark the text was unreadable. This meant that I had to make the text blue and white.  Overall I think that the DPS has too much blue, it doesn't look like a DPS that should be in a magazine to me.

For my next draft/final DPS I am going to try and move the image over to the right, like my first draft as i have more room to place the body text because I think it looks quite cramped. I am also going to lighten the background and maybe the image altogether so I can then have the text in black like I planned. I would like my DPS to look more like my first draft because it was clean, bright and it didn't have too much of one colour.